Hmmm, think I'm almost there -- as I planned, I darkened the area behind her head and back, desaturated the bright yellow highlight on her face, taking out some of the yellow, darkened more of the verticals to the left of her face, more work on her face and arm....not sure what else I will do.
Knowing how to paint also entails knowing when to stop. I'm stopping. Shara No. 2 is complete.
Shara No. 2, 12"x16" ink and watercolor on paper